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06-26-2008, 09:52 AM
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Fallen MEN
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BISMILLAH
Poga Humayun Dundiwala
He who ascend in every fall
Like fallen foundation of every tall
He who drops like dripping drop
He who falls like the rain on the mountain top
And flows like the river like a fallen lover feeling the pain
Falling to give falling to gain
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06-26-2008, 09:57 AM
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SWEETSWORDS 30 [ equilibrium ]
BISMILLAH
Poga Humayun Dundiwala
He who ascend in every fall
Like fallen foundation of every tall
He who drops like dripping drop
He who falls like the rain on the mountain top
And flows like the river like a fallen lover feeling the pain
Falling to give falling to gain
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you're really good brother. 
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06-26-2008, 11:29 AM
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Re: Fallen MEN
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you're really good brother. 
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Thank You
here is some more
He who ascend in every fall
With down beating baton and uplifting call
In pin drop silence in music hall
He falls for the maestro to enthrall
And flows like a rover like a nomad lover
Feeling the satisfaction
Falling to recreate falling for recreation
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06-26-2008, 11:32 AM
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Re: Fallen MEN
my favorite line:
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Poga Humayun Dundiwala
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"i am a rock,
i am an island,
and the rock feels no pain
and the island never cries"
~S&G
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06-26-2008, 11:32 AM
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psh, i am better.
Love fade, life rakes….
people live as long as God gives…
hearts beat, eyes weep,
this isnt it, the sky hasnt lit,
people die, kids cry,
they lost everything, in just a blink
though sorrow thoughts may grow,
there is no ease in pain,
soon swift winds may again blow
to make sunshine instead of rain.
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lyke awesomeness.
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06-26-2008, 11:33 AM
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Re: Fallen MEN
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psh, i am better.
Love fade, life rakes….
people live as long as God gives…
hearts beat, eyes weep,
this isnt it, the sky hasnt lit,
people die, kids cry,
they lost everything, in just a blink
though sorrow thoughts may grow,
there is no ease in pain,
soon swift winds may again blow
to make sunshine instead of rain.
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psh, that doesnt even rhyme. boooooooooooooring.
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06-26-2008, 11:34 AM
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psh, that doesnt even rhyme. boooooooooooooring.
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uh, my dear. it DOES rhyme. its just a DIFFERENT rhyme scheme.
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06-26-2008, 11:37 AM
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uh, my dear. it DOES rhyme. its just a DIFFERENT rhyme scheme.
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get with the program foo'  its called sarcasm 
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06-26-2008, 11:40 AM
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get with the program foo'  its called sarcasm 
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uh...but sarcasm has a hint of truth to it...everything you said was false.
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06-26-2008, 11:42 AM
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uh...but sarcasm has a hint of truth to it...everything you said was false.
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ok, hows this for sarcasm... shsh is stooooooopid 
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06-26-2008, 11:42 AM
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Re: Fallen MEN
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psh, i am better.
Love fade, life rakes….
people live as long as God gives…
hearts beat, eyes weep,
this isnt it, the sky hasnt lit,
people die, kids cry,
they lost everything, in just a blink
though sorrow thoughts may grow,
there is no ease in pain,
soon swift winds may again blow
to make sunshine instead of rain.
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Yes you are better
Because i am waiter and you are writer
You rhyme so well
Like Chinese flute singing jingle bell
You are good because i am bad
You are the MUSIC of life and i am the MALADY of dead
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06-26-2008, 11:44 AM
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Re: Fallen MEN
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Originally Posted by poga
Yes you are better
Because i am waiter and you are writer
You rhyme so well
Like Chinese flute singing jingle bell
You are good because i am bad
You are the MUSIC of life and i am the MALADY of dead
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wow
like
WOW.
you are brilliant.
NO SARCASM. I swear. 
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06-26-2008, 12:19 PM
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Re: Fallen MEN
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Originally Posted by poga
Yes you are better
Because i am waiter and you are writer
You rhyme so well
Like Chinese flute singing jingle bell
You are good because i am bad
You are the MUSIC of life and i am the MALADY of dead
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yes i am the best
that'd be the answer on the test
i write with flair
i am all the words heir
my rhymes are the shiz
everyone thinks they are a bliss
i am good because you are bad
i am the trendsetter, you just kill the fad.
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yes i am the best
that'd be the answer on the test
i write with flair
i am all the words heir
my rhymes are the shiz
everyone thinks they are a bliss
i am good because you are bad
i am the trendsetter, you just kill the fad.
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i just like the last line 
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Re: Fallen MEN
Mrs Be Aql Khan Usta : Two Mouse fell in the sea of milk
One dirty fur drowned in the pure silk
One mouse in fight of survival started to swim
His swim was such that it turned and churned liquid milk into solid cream
Two Mouse fell in the sea of milk
One dirty fur drowned in the pure silk
One mouse survived by his fighting will
That mouse had the mind of the TIGER
That mouse had the heart of the AZRAEEL
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