Rap Battle Begins (part II)

[Sea_of_Roses]

So, lets get started

At the finish line waiting
for foe's dat make a living at Hating
I cant seem to escape dis lyrical calling
like unfaithful angels cant keep from falling
so stop stalling-and meet your demise
a female wit a fire flow shouldnt be a surprise
I speak wit a sizzling tongue
and got a shine that belittles the sun
Im at the finish line wit da mic in my hand
meet me and see the verbal force I command

[Sea_of_Roses]

where are all the challengers

[seriyus]

Sea_of_Roses said

So, lets get started

At the finish line waiting
for foe's dat make a living at Hating
I cant seem to escape dis lyrical calling
like unfaithful angels cant keep from falling
so stop stalling-and meet your demise
a female wit a fire flow shouldnt be a surprise
I speak wit a sizzling tongue
and got a shine that belittles the sun
Im at the finish line wit da mic in my hand
meet me and see the verbal force I command

as salaamu alaikum sista i was reading ur lyrics and i was just droppin in to tell u i think ur lyrics are pretty good mashallah!!! i was wonder have u ever put out music?
anyway good stuff ill holla ma salaama
J-seriyus

a seriyus world and u cant play in it!!!

[wheelworks]

What in the world do you do when you're wise
ultimately waiting for the call of your demise
Pray oh pray for a good Ramadan
Might as well also pray for a good franchise
welcome to the world of business man!
but a good business needs a good mind
dats the way to show...how great how wise
and ultimately it's in the hands of the lord up high
and now we face the ultimate question bleah
strong enuf to make someone despise
...why does most of my words of rhetoric end in -ise?

Bah I hate rap donchaknow

[MasterONaniFiqh]

oh damn it's a surprise attack, i take away your shoe and i hide it in your napsack
i'm like a drunk high on the power of the juice, got a moldly candy in my pocket gotta let it loose
who's the goose standing next to ya with the long neck
it's like your girl is the only survivor of a train wreck
tellin her that she's pretty is like lyin to a blind guy
you say he's wearin' polka dots, when he's got a striped tie
you need to check yourself like a spelling bee
and if you mess with me a mess is all that's left of what you're gonna be
and now to conclude my little interlude
yo i'm gonna eat a pizza and do some kung fu
cowabanga dude

[Sea_of_Roses]

Your rhyme books probably stack to the sky
but without wings how you expect them to fly?
Im high off these metaphors of morphine
sweat syllables to keep my pores clean
I dont lean or walk wit a swagger
voted to be the female version of Mick Jagger
see I INNOVATE and you Imitate
humiliate ya fam and make'em immigrate
I think its time, I'll leave it at that
Cant keep supplying broke feins wit quality crack

[Sea_of_Roses]

seriyus said

as salaamu alaikum sista i was reading ur lyrics and i was just droppin in to tell u i think ur lyrics are pretty good mashallah!!! i was wonder have u ever put out music?
anyway good stuff ill holla ma salaama
J-seriyus

a seriyus world and u cant play in it!!!

THX, No but Ive done Poetry Slams and have actually won....Im trying to focus on possibly coming out with a mix CD of poetry and hip hop but I work and go to college so time is scarce

[Haramoobobi]

thus i must confess to atest: humility honing the ability to know we have the capacity thus i remind myself for my sake, and purify my intention.. that theres a chance to advance and then given a choice to venture from righteous strive becoming evil in midnight’s twilight of gray mistaking it for fighting for enlightments ray. lesson is we must be humble becasue with lifes turns an curves, thunder rumbles, and in selfish shock we often stumble seeing our goodness crumble. tis human nature, thus is true, the question is will you stay by masses rule, or will you look in the mirror your soul a bit tier–and within starkes a lighter and says ‘i’ve no joy higher’. what with i see within me? distasteful spite or a blessing of happiness gift not from persuasion but the right done in the time determined as you run against the sun realizing in the end there was only one–yourself. and only God will tell if you’ve won.

[Jamroll]

Haramoobobi said

thus i must confess to atest: humility honing the ability to know we have the capacity thus i remind myself for my sake, and purify my intention.. that theres a chance to advance and then given a choice to venture from righteous strive becoming evil in midnight’s twilight of gray mistaking it for fighting for enlightments ray. lesson is we must be humble becasue with lifes turns an curves, thunder rumbles, and in selfish shock we often stumble seeing our goodness crumble. tis human nature, thus is true, the question is will you stay by masses rule, or will you look in the mirror your soul a bit tier–and within starkes a lighter and says ‘i’ve no joy higher’. what with i see within me? distasteful spite or a blessing of happiness gift not from persuasion but the right done in the time determined as you run against the sun realizing in the end there was only one–yourself. and only God will tell if you’ve won.

Small suggestion: Formatting your text will really help us to see if you have flow or not.

[Haramoobobi]

Jamroll said

Small suggestion: Formatting your text will really help us to see if you have flow or not.

it's just a random flow of thought

but does this help?

thus i must confess to atest:
humility honing the ability to know we have the capacity thus i remind myself for my sake,
and purify my intention..
that theres a chance to advance
and then given a choice to venture from righteous strive
becoming evil in midnight’s twilight of gray
mistaking it for fighting for enlightenment's ray.
lesson is we must be humble because with life's turns an curves,
thunder rumbles,
and in selfish shock we often stumble
seeing our goodness crumble.
tis human nature,
thus is true,
the question is will you stay by masses rule,
or will you look in the mirror your soul a bit tier
–and within starkes a lighter and says ‘i’ve no joy higher’.
what with i see within me?
distasteful spite
or a blessing of happiness gift not from persuasion
but the right done in the time
determined as you run against the sun
realizing in the end there was only one–
yourself. and only God will tell if you’ve won.

[fatima]

we need another battle between sixpak and zakk...that was awesome

[Jamroll]

Haramoobobi said

it's just a random flow of thought

but does this help?

thus i must confess to atest:
humility honing the ability to know we have the capacity thus i remind myself for my sake,
and purify my intention..
that theres a chance to advance
and then given a choice to venture from righteous strive
becoming evil in midnight’s twilight of gray
mistaking it for fighting for enlightenment's ray.
lesson is we must be humble because with life's turns an curves,
thunder rumbles,
and in selfish shock we often stumble
seeing our goodness crumble.
tis human nature,
thus is true,
the question is will you stay by masses rule,
or will you look in the mirror your soul a bit tier
–and within starkes a lighter and says ‘i’ve no joy higher’.
what with i see within me?
distasteful spite
or a blessing of happiness gift not from persuasion
but the right done in the time
determined as you run against the sun
realizing in the end there was only one–
yourself. and only God will tell if you’ve won.

Much better. Very poetic.

[Sea_of_Roses]

fatima said

we need another battle between sixpak and zakk...that was awesome

yeah those were funny

[AM415]

If you guys look for the metaphors, you'll see I'm a deep guy:

(mic check...1, 2)

I'm a fatso, if you must know
I flushed down 3 burgers with a ho-ho
I drink water from the tap
Because I can rap
and they aint rumors, I ate a Dorito
That fell under the sofa 1 month ago

[sally]

1, 2, 3 check
you play one card,
i throw you my whole deck.
yeah, risk taker, that's what they call me,
leaps come with a thrill,
imaginations boring cheap and free
1, 2, 3 action - that's my forte
i'd throw you a mind game,
'fraid yo brains got a case of decay.
so if you got will power, determination, and physical strenght
dont just sit there,
take it all the way to the military camp.
but if you into ideas, dreams, and contempt
brace yourself.
the horizons warn me of your mental sunset.