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Old 03-23-2008, 09:24 PM
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Default Help! Anyone know a decent poem about being a Muslim woman?

Asalamu alaikum,

Does anyone know of a poem about being a Muslim woman (preferably in English, and about the American/Western experience?) I know there are plenty out there, but all the ones I've encountered are corny or rhyme "soul" with "facial mole."

I really need to find one as soon as possible, because my school is doing a poetry night for Islam Awareness Week, in um... two days. I'm in the middle of exams, and I don't have a lot of time to spend in finding one. So if anyone can help, I'd appreciate it sooo much.

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Old 03-23-2008, 09:29 PM
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Here's a page to browse through:

Some Islamic Poems!
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You're quite creative Afra. And you're a Muslim woman. Why don't you have a go at writing one? I think you would do quite a good job.
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I could try to write something for you afra, try.
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Default Re: Help! Anyone know a decent poem about being a Muslim woman?

I have two Muslim poetry books, I could check in them if you like.
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Default Re: Help! Anyone know a decent poem about being a Muslim woman?

does anyone know a poem about being a muslim man??

or here's a thought...

how about something on just being a Muslim - irrespective of gender???

wow what a concept!
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Default Re: Help! Anyone know a decent poem about being a Muslim woman?

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You're quite creative Afra. And you're a Muslim woman. Why don't you have a go at writing one? I think you would do quite a good job.
thank you .... normally i would, but my muse hasnt visited me in a looong time. also, im in the middle of studying for three gigantic exams, so i dont think i have time to write something of quality.

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I could try to write something for you afra, try.
i'd really appreciate it

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I have two Muslim poetry books, I could check in them if you like.
do you think you could?

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does anyone know a poem about being a muslim man??
or here's a thought...
how about something on just being a Muslim - irrespective of gender???
wow what a concept!
ooh, great idea. let's turn this into another thread about gold-digging desi girls.
i'm only asking for a poem of this nature because we already have several brothers presenting poems in different languages and on different themes relating to islam, and the event organizer asked me to present something to help balance that out.
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theres a song called "the veil" by dawud wharnbsy its about wearing hijab..

heres the lyrics

Lyrics

They say, "Oh, poor girl, you're so beautiful you know
It's a shame that you cover up your beauty so."
She just smiles and graciously responds reassuringly,
"This beauty that I have is just one simple part of me.
This body that I have, no stranger has the right to see.
These long clothes, this shawl I wear, ensure my modesty.
Faith is more essential than fashion, wouldn't you agree?

This hijab,
This mark of piety,
Is an act of faith, a symbol,
For all the world to see.
A simple cloth, to protect her dignity.
So lift the veil from your heart to see the heart of purity.

They tell her, "Girl, don't you know this is the West and you are free?
You don't need to be opressed, ashamed of your femininity."
She just shakes her head and she speaks so assuredly,

"See the bill-boards and the magazines that line the check-out isles, with their phony painted faces and their air-brushed smiles?
Well their sheer clothes and low cut gowns are really not for me.
You call it freedom, I call it anarchy."

This hijab,
This mark of piety,
Is an act of faith, a symbol,
For all the world to see.
A simple cloth, to protect her dignity.
So lift the veil from your heart to see the heart of purity.
Lift the veil from your heart and seek the heart of purity.
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Default Re: Help! Anyone know a decent poem about being a Muslim woman?

I'm sorry, I couldn't find anything specifically relevant that wasn't blatantly terrible.
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no afrkabob, i really would like to know why do feminazis always have to make things about women? how about what its like to be a muslim child growing up in a non-muslim enviornment? or how about a muslim growing up in a third world country in poverty? or something that doesnt have to exactly always be about gender. sheesh and were the one's called 'sexist'??

why stop there? why not do something about race then? like being desi, or being kashmiri? its the same thing when you have to bring gender into it as well.

i mean if you want to do something about wearing a hijab in a non-muslim enviornment thats one thing, since most muslim females in the west, dont wear a hijab to begin with.
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I was going to to say Dawud Ali Wharnsbys My Hijab, especially the live version from GPU where he changed up the lyrics a bit.
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no afrkabob, i really would like to know why do feminazis always have to make things about women? how about what its like to be a muslim child growing up in a non-muslim enviornment? or how about a muslim growing up in a third world country in poverty? or something that doesnt have to exactly always be about gender. sheesh and were the one's called 'sexist'??

why stop there? why not do something about race then? like being desi, or being kashmiri? its the same thing when you have to bring gender into it as well.

i mean if you want to do something about wearing a hijab in a non-muslim enviornment thats one thing, since most muslim females in the west, dont wear a hijab to begin with.
Uhh.. maybe she's addressing females or wants to discuss the Muslim female experience? For most women, it's radically different from the Muslim male experience. Why does everything inspire you to whine about how unfair life is?
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no afrkabob, i really would like to know why do feminazis always have to make things about women?
so writing a poem about being a female Muslim equates to being a feminazi? you're so deranged i dont even know why i'm bothering to respond.

i suppose you'd prefer it if women stayed at home and kept their mouths shut to reinforce whatever stereotypes exist about their role in Muslim society.
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Default Re: Help! Anyone know a decent poem about being a Muslim woman?

jazaks to everyone who helped.
i found a beautiful poem and recited it at the event last night. it went pretty well, alhamdulillah


"My Sister's Prayer" by Suheir Hammad

She has never heard a woman call her
To prayer, still she answers-
Bears witness five times a day.
She faces East
And washes her body covers her human form
In preparation to meet the Most High.

She raises her hands,
Aware of all who have come before her.
Folds hands on her breast,
Right on top of left.
Between Arabic words heart beat breath.
She raises her hands,
In hope of all that will follow.

Humble and knowing she needs no defense,
She bows.
Before no man,
She bows.
Behind the men,
She bows,
Knowing angels will raise her back up

She prays on rugs, carpets, cardboard, earth.
She prays hungry, ill, misguided, hurt.

All the while calling on Perfection, Grace

Head to the ground,
Even the floor she walks upon becomes sacred.
She prays in prescribed form, but knows
There is no language the Universe does not accept.
There is no posture void of God.

She is Sarah's daughter.
She is Hagar's daughter.
And like her father Abraham, her tent is open
In the four directions.
For each wind will carry her prayers.
From each direction will come her blessings.
From the trees and the rocks,
From the seas and the hills.

She sits alone, knowing she is one of many.
She sits alone, knowing no one can petition for her.

All the while calling on Compassion, Mercy.

Her hands are open.
Her father taught her to read the words.
Her mothers teach her to live them.
Her brothers told her to live by the law.
Her sisters tell her the only law is Love.

She invokes peace over her right shoulder,
Then her left.
She sits alone with all that daily creates her.
She sits alone and patiently waits
To experience the feminine force of the Divine
Within her own body, her own face.
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Walking through the alleyway
At 4am
On the way to fajr prayer
no trafffic, no chaos, no mayhem.
A Kaffir jumps out and attacks
But she's got her ninja moves
She front kicks him spinning in the morning air
She's got a headscarf and she's got the grooves.

"Look Mr Kaffir, i can slam my heel into the left side of your brain
but i'll let you off if you bow your head in shame.
Come pray with me and i might even marry you
Shame me and flying-kick you to the moon...

before you can say the words..."paper boy"
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