[Jamroll]

Originally Posted by Haramoobobi

it's just a random flow of thought

but does this help?

thus i must confess to atest:
humility honing the ability to know we have the capacity thus i remind myself for my sake,
and purify my intention..
that theres a chance to advance
and then given a choice to venture from righteous strive
becoming evil in midnight’s twilight of gray
mistaking it for fighting for enlightenment's ray.
lesson is we must be humble because with life's turns an curves,
thunder rumbles,
and in selfish shock we often stumble
seeing our goodness crumble.
tis human nature,
thus is true,
the question is will you stay by masses rule,
or will you look in the mirror your soul a bit tier
–and within starkes a lighter and says ‘i’ve no joy higher’.
what with i see within me?
distasteful spite
or a blessing of happiness gift not from persuasion
but the right done in the time
determined as you run against the sun
realizing in the end there was only one–
yourself. and only God will tell if you’ve won.

Much better. Very poetic.